New game website.

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JForthDesigns #10 9 502

I created this website for the new game that we are working on, but, it has received some bad criticism from someone. I am looking for some honest feedback regarding the site. If anyone could spare a couple of minutes in their day, I would be most grateful. I am looking for advice and criticism on the overall look and feel of the site.

What could I change?

What works well?

Thanks in advance for anyone that does take a look.

www.touchoffear.co.uk

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Dizzy Media Inc. #13 31 395

I feel like the text in your website is not appealing, the graphics and general setup is nice (though you need some posts in there ;) images, vids, etc.). Just the text and possibly the background of the text area makes me feel bllaaaa

that's my honest feedback keep working on it!!

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JForthDesigns #10 9 502

Hi Dizzy,

Thanks for the comments.

When you said the text is not appealing, did you mean the font? The amount of text? or just the fact that there isn't anything to accompany it?

I do have some media on the site (in the media section) but, do you mean I should have more media scattered around on various pages?

What would you suggest as the new background for the text area?

I appreciate you taking the time to comment and I have taken everything you said on board. I will be making some changes soon.

Thanks again Dizzy.

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Dizzy Media Inc. #13 31 395

The presentation of your text in general, which is how it appears to the reader, it's format, color, what is behind it, etc.

That's what I meant by the text isn't that appealing, it's very large grey words that seem errmm "different" then the rest of the site if you know what I mean.

Try playing with that ;) No problem, always glad to help.

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